Thursday, May 19, 2011

I See What You Don't Want To

Author's note: This was inspired by the book “A Mango Shaped Space”.  I have never read it, but I know that a girl has Synesthesia and she sees differently than everyone else.  This piece is about how a person feels like no one feels or sees the world as they do. Everyone thinks they are different or even nuts just because they see things in a different perspective than they do.



You see clouds in the sky
I see free souls with personalities and stories
You may see a gray sky
I can see a rainbow
You see the sun
I see a new start
You see a broken heart
I see how to fix it
 You see the tears streaking down their face
I see an emotion
You see a flaw
I see their talents

You only see a streak of paint
I see the start of a masterpiece


You see what it appears to be
I see what it really is
I dig deeper than you do
You only cut at the edges and just peer at it

The world is to be explored of its ideas
Mysteries and wonders can be uncovered
If you see differently

3 comments:

  1. This is an awesome piece, but make sure that there is some sort of punctuation in here, like a comma at the and of each stanza. It makes it kind of hard to read.

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  2. I really like the "You, I" repetition. Also, you have really good phrases, like "You only see a streak of paint, I see the start of a masterpiece." Your title is really strong, too.

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  3. I agree with everything Monica said. This is a really strong poem.

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