Author’s note: For a creative writing challenge a long time ago, we had to write anything, but we had to incorporate a certain line in it. I chose “her breath caught as she saw him standing there”. Please give me feedback and enjoy!
Her breath caught as she saw him standing there
The sunlight dancing in his eyes
His eyes were deep
As the ocean
The blue swirling ripples in his eyes haunted her
They were powerful looking
Surging energy
Ocean waves crashing on a rocky shore
They told a story
Chapters and chapter unfolding before her
The eyes are the windows to the soul
His told much more than his fate
But all of our fates
Inside one mind
One body
Before us
A creation
Of destruction
Of fate
She couldn’t keep her eyes off him
He turned
Looking at her
His eyes
Became a storm
Grays
Blues
Swirling
Clashing
Colors
A hurricane tore the blues from his eyes
Winds of fury came behind it
He was no longer beautiful
But a tool of destruction
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