Author's Note: This is a piece about how some people’s words can really affect how you feel. Their words can really bring you down so you feel certain things about yourself that aren’t true.
I feel like I'm flying in the stars I'm as light as air The wind passing by me I feel free and limitless Those days you don't bring me down With your words you drag me down Throwing me off balance I am plummeting out of the sky Faster and faster I fall I try to bring myself up Some days I just can’t I don’t have the strength I don’t have the will Nothing I can do to stop it You’ll just bring me down once again
This is very good Meg. The poem really expresses your true feelings.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started out flying higher in the sky, and then you were falling faster and faster. You should center this poem, though.
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem. It's so descriptive, and it truly captures the emotion. You're a very strong poet. Keep writing stuff like this. Please! <3
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